tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post3079833651555190616..comments2022-06-14T21:12:05.302-05:00Comments on Silver Pen Scribe: Blood and Scrap Revised Part 1.SilverPenScribehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13882148938946723792noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post-49018958718573559522011-02-21T18:52:20.796-06:002011-02-21T18:52:20.796-06:00I liked the subtle reveal that the lead character ...I liked the subtle reveal that the lead character is a robot - it unfolded pretty well and felt timely yet not rushed.<br /><br />On a personal note I would appreciate more description - I only know about the chrome but little else to establish what Zener is, thus making it harder to decide on how much I want to relate or "side" with him.<br /><br />And "New Republic"? I wonder now if a Jedi will come and save him, hehe. On to the next chapter!Rocky Sunicohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10499013104520746618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post-65669498593447409482011-02-18T20:02:49.048-06:002011-02-18T20:02:49.048-06:00Well not everyone may notice some of the more subt...Well not everyone may notice some of the more subtle cues, and some may not at all. Hence the challenge! lol And yes it is a definite improvement.SilverPenScribehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13882148938946723792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post-60840624615493858422011-02-16T23:02:04.850-06:002011-02-16T23:02:04.850-06:00This is an amazing leap from the first draft of th...This is an amazing leap from the first draft of this story. This is the level of awesome I've grown accustomed to from your keyboard, man. Sad to say, I didn't notice many geeky in-jokes or references, but that's probably because I was so into the story I forgot to look for them. Amazing work. Write the next parts soon! :PM..https://www.blogger.com/profile/01062766781413736418noreply@blogger.com