tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post3134273288134093910..comments2022-06-14T21:12:05.302-05:00Comments on Silver Pen Scribe: Valiant, Detective Valiant - Part 5.SilverPenScribehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13882148938946723792noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post-82895860566788585252011-03-02T13:44:25.651-06:002011-03-02T13:44:25.651-06:00No worries, a lot of us geeky writers all probably...No worries, a lot of us geeky writers all probably draw on similar influences. And about the sound effects sections, I suppose they do indeed add a cartoon-ish action element to the overall story. As long as they add to the enjoyment and fit without being out of place or distracting I'll probably continue to use 'em.SilverPenScribehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13882148938946723792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post-78645216265203251652011-03-02T12:04:52.354-06:002011-03-02T12:04:52.354-06:00Overall, this was a fun little number which shoes ...Overall, this was a fun little number which shoes a nice demonstration of your flair for combat.<br /><br />The sound effects sections felt a tad cartoony, but then I guess that sort of worked for the whole thing.<br /><br />I hope I don't seem too copycat-ish when I get around to writing my own character studies - one had power armor as well, heheRocky Sunicohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10499013104520746618noreply@blogger.com