tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post4940253132779767215..comments2022-06-14T21:12:05.302-05:00Comments on Silver Pen Scribe: Cry Oscry - Part 5.SilverPenScribehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13882148938946723792noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post-65485605366188150112011-03-02T13:40:27.390-06:002011-03-02T13:40:27.390-06:00I won't deny some elements in my Requiem stuff...I won't deny some elements in my Requiem stuff are probably influenced by Starcraft, weather intentionally or not. I've played it for years. As for more description/details, feel free to look over the Gael-Noir primer I did, I believe the post is "A post of Whimsy." I do concede though I really need to work on descriptions/visual details on many of my characters. That is all a part of improving though, this has helped me see a lot of areas that need work. Back to the forges I guess!SilverPenScribehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13882148938946723792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6880630457315450498.post-22060866915457923772011-03-02T12:28:13.298-06:002011-03-02T12:28:13.298-06:00Following my earlier StarCraft comment, this chara...Following my earlier StarCraft comment, this character would then be a Protoss, haha.<br /><br />Overall, the action flowed a lot better in this one than in the previous story, methinks. A part of me still wishes I knew more about what our protagonist looked like, but then the place setting was awesome.Rocky Sunicohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10499013104520746618noreply@blogger.com